Childhood promises of Eternal Love- Contest # 23

May 10 2008  | Views 314 |  Comments  (38)
 Childhood promises of Eternal Love The waves have receded taking our etched hearts in ... Expand

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  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

babs
i like this one too



  bhavna14 posted 2 mnths ago

lovelyy one bina ji... movin lines out thrrr... btt gr888 lines for d piccc...  i likeddd these onesss for their simplicity n depth... 

If I play my cards right maybe the gods above will make us cross
The same paths where we can once again take up where we left off

rgds
Bhavna



  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

meera J
I too think this came out ok



  meerajay posted 2 mnths ago

Fantastic poem binaji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Cheers
Meera



  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

ajitji
welcome n tx 4 yr knd words
bina



  ajitnambiar posted 2 mnths ago

wow.............another beauty from bina !



  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

rajji
yr comment is valuable n will cherish it



  Raj Arumugam posted 2 mnths ago


The poem is so well-writtenand the lines flow with ease and power;  your last stanza (getting off the train) has such simple imagery and yet is so strong as a befitting ending...



  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

vikramji
welcome n tx



  vikram karve posted 2 mnths ago

Beautifully expressed





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